Fair call on the improvment mark,
I don't think there's many of us hating on his endeavour to show his journey from day 1 which includes the rejection.
It's more that people on this forum have probably learnt the blueprint or atleast seen the free vids on here and are used to seeing that structure that never really fails (devised by yad and andy).
So when they see the complete opposite in video form, it is a bit stark and little bit hard to watch.
I'll give him the cred for uploading these vids (early vids) so people can see what not to do. It takes a lot juice to throw them up there, so props are given where they are due from me.